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Chapter 1 illustration LINE

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This is the illustration of the first chapter for one of my stories, which is called Rosalie.

The guy who's about to be smashed by a car is named is Sebastien and he's like super rich. (My friends compares often him to Takashima KEI in Special A for its personality)

The girl that looks at him is, well, Rosalie. She's got huge problemwith her father who turned alcoholoic after the death of her twin borther and her mother.

The two legs that can be seen on top of the traffic lights belong to Netsabeth, the angel responsible to pick up Sebastien' soul.

to :iconimprovement-club: :I would like to know your impression about Sebastien's pose and the overall feeling of this piece. I'm not too sure if he looks enough like he's about to fall. The anatomy is also something i would like to get corrected on.(especially the right hand of Rosalie)

Please comment if you have anything to say ^^
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Interesting composition. I'm sure someone else can give a better response on the anatomy/redline, but here is my quick impressions. I think you did a good job in regards to the feeling of him falling, but I don't get the impression of him like he is falling to his death via car. It almost looks like he is happy/playing around to me. Might just be me. Unless that was the intention, like he was playing around and then got hit by a car because of carelessness or something.

A couple of questions I have to get a clearer picture. If you are foreshortening the hand that much that it is that much bigger does that mean he is already past the car with his hand? Even with foreshortening you still need to keep things in perspective on each level, ie if the the hand is the same distance from the viewer as the car or not as far as the car yet, you need to keep it all in proportion to one another. The other thing is, you enlarged the hand toward us but his left hand, the one farther away from the viewer, also seems abnormally large to me and/or his arm is a bit short. Your hands look good though (I'm awful at them), and most of your overall anatomy looks quite good.

Another question I have is I don't have a clear sense of why he is falling here. It doesn't look like he tripped over anything at least visually. Is he drunk or something or just clumsy/falling over his feet? Was he pushed? I'm sure it's explained in your story but I'd love if it was visually shown here or at least hinted at.